That was good. Try changing your numbes, like '1', into 'one'. It looks more professional. Also, try to get all your contractions to work (cant = can't). Capitals on new sentances :).
Other than the puncuation the poem had a good meaning, and really is sad.
Kepp up the good work

Aww thanks or should i say thank's lol yh im shit at english so i didnt notice the puncuation lol but thank you!!!

This is seemingly a trend in women due to the fact that my most recent ex- still does the same. She says she hates me just once a day and I still tell her I love her.