This was really a nice write...
i already felt that way...
anyway
your poem is really good...
keep going
*isabel*

Aww. This is a really nice poem! The ending was what made me truly like it, and it shows the truth. People will do anything for someone they care about. Just wondering, but did you get this idea for a poem by past experience? You don't have to answer, only if you want to. Well, keep it up, and 5/5 from the Illusionist.

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist

P.S. If you get a chance, can you comment and/or rate some of my poems as well?

Hey i especially liked this one better than the others =] 6/5 lol