Hassan
How true your words are. We can not bring back things of yesterday. How I wish we could. Great job on this piece. Makes you stop and think.
Take Care Your Friend Cindy

This is really true n i truely agree wth u.beautifuly done...
5/5

God bless u

Great job. i love the whole concept behind the poem.

p.s. thanks for the comment

This is beautiful!
The emotion behind the words are clear for all to see, the flow is flawless throughout and the imagery portrayed was wonderful, it created very vivid pictures.
Intense and hardhitting ending, beautifully wrapped up.