Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Great poem, nicely worded, 5/5

Beautiful poem..Penned very well...I loved the choice of words in this one..it was touching and deep..
It flowed smoothly too..well written dark poem!

Kp up the good work!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

This is a very sad poem... its very easy for me to relate to... i understand.. maybe you could read mine Scars??
well done you have some great talant keep it up

This is so heartbreaking to read, and yet so beautifully written at the same time.
I love the imagery you created in this, it created very vivid pictures on my mind.
Flow was flawless throughout the entire piece and word choice was a pleasure to read, as was the whole poem.

Interesting, but again I didn't like it.
I didn't feel the emotion in it and I didn't feel you telling me a story.
Sorry, I just didn't enjoy it as I did "Save The World." Now ThAT was a poem.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5