Wow. powerful poem
it real captures the fact that your entire life can change in a simple moment
loved it!
5/5

Excellent poem...beautiful work..short though but...great write...very powerful peice!..Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

It is true that one thing can change things instantly there are countless quotes about it. This was good, a bit more length would be nice, but otherwise it was good . =)

Hey hun..
erm this brought tears to my eyes because it were nearly exactly how my best lad mate left me.. and it brought up old hurt feeligs..
god i miss him but hey..

wel written

Hey great poem