Beautifully touching poem. well written, excellent word choice and a deep feeling of love. wish my ole man would write a poem like that for me. lol 5/5

Wonderful poem, I loved the comparisons that you included and the flow was very nice. Keep your pen to the paper. ^.^ *5/5*

Alyson

David
Just like your title this piece is very sweet :) It brought a smile to my face.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

This is a really really sweet poem David. It was beautifully written, the flow and rhym was perfect. 5/5

Kalee

This is one of those poems that is short, sweet, and says a lot. I love the simplicity of it. The flow is perfect, and the rhyming works so good with this. The description is well written. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. A poem that affects me like that is really a good one. Well done. =] 5/5

Tammie

It was so cute and touching...short,easy to read but so meaningful
My fave lines should be;

You're sweet as soft velvet
So silky to touch
You're sweet as forever
And I love you so much

Well done david,
Take care
Laura

I loved it david. it was a beautifull poem. excellent job 5/5
whitney

Beautiful , sweet, full of lovely emotion....

Awww David
How beautiful!
This is exactly what I needed to read write now
It was short and simple
and it was beautifully written
But I guess all of your poems are so I should expect it
5/5 from me
wishing I could put 20
love always kaila

Awww David
How beautiful!
This is exactly what I needed to read write now
It was short and simple
and it was beautifully written
But I guess all of your poems are so I should expect it
5/5 from me
wishing I could put 20
love always kaila

Awww this is really cute !!!

What a sweet poem!

Very sweet poem ,well done.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! Who is this girl you keep writing about? she must be really special to you!

Aww david so beautiful!
I love it so very much
mwah your such a fan-tab-ulous writer
yay