I loved the repetition thru out this poem. it was amazing and made it stronger and have a purpose. for the reader to feel sorry...

5/5 David

Seriously awesome, loved it sooooooooo much well done. I can't do repetition haha it just doesnt work for me but you nailed it! awesome work well done enjoyed the read 5/5

It was dark poem but it really enjoyed i fee i am singing. it has a great flow for me! i cant really imagine u have extremely imagery at young age just keep it up5/5

Very touchy work you have i loved your poem its lovely and good. take care

Excellent peice..The repetition have given the poem a good effect...it flowed well too..kp up the good work!
xxPoojaxx

The repeation made the poem, I mean wow, that was truly amazing. I loved it. the flow was flawless, and the word choice was strong. Great job, keep up the good work, so far this is the one I liked the best. really an awesome job, pat yourself on the back.