Comments : Is it okay?

  • 12 years ago

    by Nathan Turner

    I loovveeeee this :D
    such description :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I generally love this poem!!!! it is just so .... heart felt and loving ... and just one word WOW!!!! love it ..... its definately going into my favourites ... lol

    fav stanza:
    All I can do is say,
    You're perfect in every way.
    And I was wondering, is it okay,
    Is it okay, if I take your breath away?

  • 11 years ago

    by vanillasky

    Wickedly beautiful