Comments : Deep Inside

  • 17 years ago

    by Jordan

    I really like this poem. Just as Adam said, the last stanza was pretty perfect, I must say!

    Everything was great in this poem - it seems like it all just kind of fell together perfectly. I don't know if I'd change anything about it.

  • 17 years ago


    First off, I loved the way you started this. From the first line, it already pulled me into it and made me want to read on. Then, your imagery was explained everything and were able to create a vivid picture in my mind. And then there was your last stanza which wrapped it up perfectly.

    This really goes well with the saying "Don't judge a person before you get to know them." Because, as you have stated throughout this poem, no one knows what strength you really have and deep inside there is that strength. Anyways, another awesome piece by you.