Comments : When You Kiss Me

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Oh Wow you have just pegged those feelings that the most powerful love can ignite. It brings out every depth of emotion within when we feel that kiss. These lines to me were so powerful and by far my favorite. Although all of them are great these stuck out the most.

    One sultry look and I am bound,
    Flesh to flesh, united,
    Never shall I taste regret,
    For what we have ignited. never taste regret for what was ignited. This is truly such a unique line and I love it. 5/5


  • 17 years ago

    by Jordan

    This was a good poem. I liked some of the language used - "Lost to lust" is a good playful phrase.

    Still, like most of your other poetry, I found that it lacked any truly powerful imagery. It was good, but that's about it. I find with a topic like this, without power only comes a good poem and nothing more.

    (not that I'm a master poet or anything) :)