Umm it wuzz good it could be a little bit longer butt yehh 4/5:)

Descrtive, and deep. Youd di a great job, it keep me intrested, and the flow was great.5/5

I did not really like this poem. It was short, choppy, and for such a short poem I would expect it to have precise capitalization, punctuation, and syllabication... but this was absent in this work as well. I was not impressed by this, because it seemed like just a few lines put together to create a poem to increase your vote count, or something along the lines... I don't know what it was with this poem, but when you write a poem, you can tell if someone has put their heart and soul into that poem and this just didn't strike me as a poem you put effort into.

Hopefully, you will improve as time goes on,

Best of wishes,
5/5
~Stephen White

I couldnt see much point within it, but i am sure there is some. It was too short for my liking but i did enjoy it, because it was different
love Tara-Kay
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