Some really good rhyming in this one and the flow is flawless. the line 'no negotiation' is very short and this emphasises it.
i like how the opening line says 'for love and negotiation'.. and then the last line is 'no negotiation'. To me, this shows how He created her 'for love and negotiation' but then she wanted more and more and more so he changed his mind.
this is a great depiction of the world and how people always want what they cant have. well written :)

kim xx