I really like the structure of this one, the repetition seems to mix it all up but it works really well in emphasising those lines. the alliteration in 'picture perfect' is very good too, as it enhances the perfection.
and i like the way you've used the 'angel' to show this by contrasting this symbol of love and perfection with hate. this helps the reader to see how perfect the person/thing is.
5/5

kim xx

Thats retarded = p.sorry.

The flow was good abit redundent for me but a good write none the less. Take Care Plot121