Good idea to put the haiku's together, it makes a nice structure and they flowed together well.
you're language creates great imagery, describing a very peaceful scene but also giving the waterfall a sort of rebellious character, in that it splashes everywhere refusing to be contained.
nice work

kim xx

The iumages you portrade in this work was done well but towards the end the flow seemed abit off hum nice short poem but would work on making the ending flow more. Plot121

This my dear is BEAUTIFUL!
The imagery you used created very vivid pictures, and I was left with a peaceful feeling after reading this.
It flowed well and I liked the repetition used in the first and second haiku.

I love the way you can quadruple haiku like that. It's a wonderful form of poetry, and Is a lovely poem.