This is good keep it up

That was so heartbreakingly sad yet at the same time it was written so beautifully..
The phrase 'broken tears' is excellent.
You've done a brilliant job on this short yet heartfelt poem
5/5
*Gem*

Oh...gosh...such a heartfelt peice.....so sad...yet it's written so perfectly...just beautiful work...and Perfect wording...very nice job!
Sure 5/5!
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