Debbie
What a intense poem. Imagery and word choices excellent as always.

Dark entrenched a soul's torment
Clothes of Heaven bleak and rent
Coldest slab in deep repose
Bled and dry false lover's rose

These lines really spoke to me. Your talent is amazing :)
Love your sis Cindy

Somehow this poem speaks to me at a very deep level, as you always do.......i could say so much more but I am so biased.......

you are.......

Reading your poetry is like reading a shakesperean poem, so beautifully written, i love the flow, your choice in vocabulary is extrodinary, absolutely love it , i give this one a 5/5!!! keep up the great poems!!!

Blow the gale of heartache's sorrow
Mourning tree of lost tomorrows
Marble writ in torment rests
Chosen path of no regrets

^^ ah the ending was so strong and purposeful. well done.

5/5 David

Extremely spine-chilling, Ms. Debbie. It infuses a variety of dreary emotions, most notably the sorrowful quality of its diction and grasp. Recollecting the past is nerve-wracking sometimes...

"Blow the gale of heartache's sorrow"

How those lines strike a chord with me! I can just visualize myself being slapped by this gust.

'Twas a magnificent work of art. My pleasure to read one of your latest works, once again. Thank you for sharing! Love, Debbie

Wow that was depressing and really good, nice flow. 5/5

I could feel u through this poem. Really nice. 5/5. Always remember every cloud has a silver lining. tc

This piece well examines the dimly lit place of the heart, more commonly known as “the void”; one of the abuses from which the void feeds comes from giving and not receiving, and placing unwarranted trust in someone.

You give into its dark ambiance masterfully. This embossment attracts me with its sweet sorrow.

Hey this poem is awesome.. i simply loved the way it worked so perfectlyyyy....its perfectly fluent..
keep it up :)
great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5

So good it left me dizzy....