Cathy
This is very sad. Guilt and remorse can eat away at our souls. The emotions in this piece come through touching ones heart. Great job.
Take care Cindy

Sometimes we forget the important things in life and when they go and nothing can bring them back we realise just how lucky we were :) another beautifull piece of art :) this poem touched me deeply as you know, im going thru the same thing :( but i hope you never stop writing because your poems help me thru the lonely days :) 5/5

Cathy

your poem always take my breath away. I havent managed to be on here as much cause of my work and then the first poem i read by you is so sad. You still have a way to touch people through your words. Stay strong and take care.

Kelly
xx

Cathy, this is a poem that is so relateable in so many ways.......My best friend decided to up and leave me when I needed her the most and this poem here left me wondering "does she feel like this?".....you know, as long as you realize your mistake I guess thats a positive thing even though you lost someone you loved so much....you can just only pray they are forgiving to get things back on track......this was a very good poem that I for one have been in the same situation!
I really enjoyed!
Chelsey!