Comments : Anticipating the End

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    I like how the angry and emotions come across in this. At least you aren't upset over it, you know that it just wasn't right. A great poem, flowing nicely and rhyming well. I can relate to this a lot also. 5/5 =]

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Nice poem. It was short, but it brought the point through. I liked the ending especially, it's a nice poem to read when you just get out of a breakup. It'll help, I know it helped me:). Makes you feel as though he's not even worth you, coz he's just a boy confused and derranged :P...