Well done on this form Cindy! Love to see you try new things and do so well!....and I'm thrilled to be the first to comment...Love, Debbie

This is a very good etheree cindy, i love this style as you can see from my poetry, and you did great on this style, i give it a 5/5 as always!!!! keep up the great poetry styles!!!

"Darkness filling my soul
Pain deeper than any known"

How deep and profound... I've had my heart and soul covered by darkness in the past and a distinct heartache which still aches in the present moment... I simply love those lines. =D

I haven't seen you write any formed poetry in the past. And this one was written well! Additional props for that. ;) Well done! Keep them coming! Love, Debbie

That was sad and touched my heart ,so beautifully done.

Ah well done with this use of technique.

grows into a great and strong poem....

5/5 David

Wow your diffinately talented in writing specific poems, another great piece to add to your collection xox sam

Well talking abt a challenge and thats also when the theme is Grief...who could beat you??
Welcome to the new world of poetry...so now you are no more like a simple poet.. :o) Well you never have been.

This is really a very nice piece...no matter what you write and how you write....they always turn out to be excellent.

all the best and take care

Well done Cindy!
Now aren't they fun to do?
You've accepted the challenge and met it so brilliantly.
It's so painfully grief-ridden but the words you've used are, as always, beautifully read.
Kudos m'dear =)
5/5
*gem*

A challenge was created .... and you jumped right in and penned a poetic masterpiece.
Well done on the new form dear Cindy !

Very smooth and moving! 5/5

Well done, good work. Will read more of your soon =)

Warmet regards,

Steve

Great work on this poem form. You faced this challenge well. The grief can be felt.
All the best.
Ben

I love this idea...i gave a whirl, excellent technique..i love it, awesome writing, keep it up

Perfect! Its exactly what loss feels like..