Comments : Hidden Depths

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very different. a nice piece with some good flow and a deeper word usage then I normally see from you. I really liked this one!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentRebuke

    Wow. I liked the poem b4 i looked at the picture for the contest, but afterward its even better. I like the angle you took on this poem. it could be applied to so much more than the sea. nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    You've taken this picture and ran with it creating a wonderfully penned write.
    I see we chose the same title ..... wonderful minds think alike ... lol

    Too often we take what we see
    And never look beyond what's apparent
    But look at all you are missing
    By assuming she is transparent
    ^^^^
    I love this stanza .... Great message!

    Take care
    Luanne