Good job Ash :)

Great poem.

A good read. There's not much of a flow, or rhythm, but that's what I like about it. Great job.

This is really good keep it up you inspire me.
love ya
ashli

Good Job!!

I like it its sweet and cute

Wow! tis really good hun... thats how i feel bout my missus :)...
put a smile on my face.. was amazing =]