Comments : The Simple Things You Do

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "Seeing you just makes my day-
    My world, it feels complete.
    You have nothing to worry about-
    With you is where I wanna be."

    Those lines strike a chord with me... such a very nice write...=)
    Take care now and all the best.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rach

    I loved your poem...it made me think alot about the relationship im in :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww very sweet and simple to read. Cute how you wrote out the special moments. I can relate to that poem :) Amazing write! Keep up the great work! 5/5