Comments : Can you be mine?

  • 16 years ago

    by linda

    I love it :)

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Wow what a beautiful ending. Keep writing dear. You are such a nice writer

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I really liked the ending in this poem. Strong emotions, excellent word choice, great flow, clear message again you have outdone yourself 5/5 although I believe you deserve more

  • 15 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Just by telling a simple word
    Yes or no from the bottom of your heart.

    I really enjoyed reaing this line. Overall it is wonderful!