Debbie what a piece of beauty you have written.The imagery and word choices are excellent.

Jeweled orb in galaxy's array
Rebirth of souls in destiny's ballet

These lines paint such a picture for my minds eys...Beauty and ellegance.
Love Cindy

Debbie beautiful poem full of thought provoking words.........
Tiny gleam in lover's longing eyes
Gives life the dream, intrinsic paradise
Jeweled orb in galaxy's array
Rebirth of souls in destiny's ballet

tiny gleam??? 4.2 mmmmm
dot in the wrong place????
42.0 million...thats better!!

Very good write. deb. beautiful word usage.

What is that you eat before writing poems....i just cant figure out... :o) Your poems are just so different and this is what i feel after reading any of your poem.

very elegantly written

all the best and take care

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Wow! this is a truly beautiful write! i really enjoyed it! keep up the good work! bravo
god bless