Comments : Self harm

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This poem hit me hard...
    It was very emotional & intense. The flow was flawless, & the word usage was great.

    "Laughter around me,people stare at me,ask me why?

    For them to know why,they would have to try it them self's"

    ^ So true... 5.5 Wonderful job!
    I look forward to seeing you on the discussion board too! =]

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by shannon

    I liked your poem.and for some 1 to know why thet ve to try it