Oo I like this one. The emotion in it was great. Your rhyming was good as well. I tend to have problems with that but it seems to come natural to you but I could be decieved : ] The flow was good and overall it was a good poem. Good work on this one :D

Wooow, I liked this one. I agree with Sydney. =3

Wooow, I liked this one. I agree with Sydney. =3

Sorry, double post. ><