Well, I must say that I thought that this piece was going to be rubbish, but after I read the first stanza, my opinion was completly changed. Just so you know, I always say my true opinion and I always vote what I really think, unlike many others on this site. Anyway, the flow was superb, as was the wording and story itself, alone with the creative rhymes. My favorite stanza has to be the opening one, because it was strong and flowing, with a good rhyme.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your vote and comment on my poem 'Death to the both', and I'm glad you liked it.

A very good piece indeed. Straight away I was hooked, and my attention didn't once drift, because every line had it's place. The wonderful choice of words were strung together beautifully. A very enjoyable and impressive piece.

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote on every poem you read.

P.P.S. Thank you for your comments on my poem 'Death to the Both'.