Oh green one...i really liked this write. the flow was undisturbed, mixed with awesome rhymes. The words used were not the ordinary, everyday words you read all the time on this site...your originality always captures and holds my attention from stanza to stanza!!

Ohhh I LIKE this!
Such a beautiful opener with each stanza better than the last, very inspiring and a beautiful intense ending.

DAMN STEAMIE!!!!!!!!!!! I DIDNT KNOW YOU HAD THIS IN YOU!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT A BEAUTIFUL WRITE MR. MAN!!!!!!!!!!! BE PROUD OF THIS WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!