Comments : Right In Her Arms

  • 16 years ago

    by homebound

    That is so good! i have had that happen and my heart just sinks! great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    I love the poem and the mood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow my fave part has to be the last stanza. I loved the story you told and the image you created. Well done *5/5*