So cute I wish im Jiya.

Umm i dident realy understand it im sorry but i give u a 4/5

What a delightful piece! O, how I wish I was Jiya! Heh. =]

To digress a bit, I suppose that if one got the wrong impression of the theme, one doesn't have to leave a review on it. It would be completely pointless... :| Oh, well, perhaps humans do differ from each other--obviously.

Back to the poem, it was simply adorable. Quite endearing to say the least. Your emotions and desire are noticeable through your words. And I can't help but recollect incidents of an affection developed with the use of the internet. *sighs* Lovely piece, m'dear. I'd like to know more about Jiya as well, haha :).

Wow..
Beautiful peice ..very well penned...the opening stanza was superb..and the way used "Jiya" added to the power of the emotions portrayed thru this well written work!

5/5
kp writing!

xxPoojaxx

That was amazing, well penned powerful emtion excellent word choice, amazing flow, job well done once again 5/5 for you really deserve it

Well written. This was thoughtful and heartfelt from the begining to end. The wording was great and really described the feelings towards her. Keep writting!

5/5

Wow this is very special for me coz my name is there in this piece. Love you honey mwah. Keep writing.

Jiya

I don't like first stanza. Second stanza is great. Third is good. Imagery is excellent. I don't like fourth stanza. I like fifth stanza very much. I don't like the topic, you described emotions on a good way. Sorry but I really don't like first and fourth stanza, 4/5

So cute and this one is special coz u have written it for JIya....how special and romantic.....

Wow 5/5