by Brittany C
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I liked this poem. Though it sounded like you were comparing a women to a boat. Or the other way around. One thing I would change |
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Wow mixture of rhyming words and rhyming schemes. I liked it v much. tc |
by Jiyaa
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You're the love for I daily wail |
by Jiyaa
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Whenever you're in desolation |