Comments : Beyond your imagination

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked this poem. Though it sounded like you were comparing a women to a boat. Or the other way around. One thing I would change

    I'll never let any one to steal
    maybe try
    I'll never allowe anyone to steal

    I liked this poem but I don't know maybe you could change it a little. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Wow mixture of rhyming words and rhyming schemes. I liked it v much. tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    You're the love for I daily wail
    You're the only ship I gaily sail
    Baby I'm not going to make you fail
    For I've only you in my life to hail

    Wow Fsams this is splendid poetry. Look at the wordings Great Great for sure 5/5 from me

    Jiya

  • 15 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Whenever you're in desolation
    I will be your consolation
    My love isn't just an infatuation
    Baby it's beyond your imagination

    I really loved this poem coz I showed how rhyming can be done in the same sounds. Superb!