Very nice poem. The only thing I would change would be

A short pony hair with no lice
maybe you could try "nice" instead of "lice"
because you make it seem like all other grils have lice.

I did like the poem after that line. 5/5

Your poem is nice. I think u must try revisin the lice line. but its a great poem

This poem was beautiful, though it seemed a little choppy and the line

"A short pony hair with no lice"

took away from it, and I also think the third stanza could use some work. Other then those two areas, the flow was well done and the wording was incredable. Great job!

5/5

Wow this is another beautiful love poem. I love the lines

Whenever I see her, even for a while
She speaks to me with a lovely smile

5/5 all the way

I don't now what but something is very funny in this poem. It is interesting. Your emotions in this piece reminds me on one my friend. 5/5