Really nice poem...
it kind of made me laugh...though it might not be supposed to...it reminded me i came late to every single class this year...
*rebel look*
lol
it's really original...perhaps ironical, i dunno...it depends on what your true opinion about rules is...
but it surely deserves 5/5
=)
*isabel*

He he this piece reminds me of my school life. V nice dear

I liked this one. It was different and interesting. Another 5/5

marcella

This poem is so true.

Just keep writing man!