This is such a sad piece. You have expressed your emotions so well.

Unsatisfied from my pure love
You changed your course to a new
Left me lone without a reason
No more love, memories to renew

This stanza really stands out. Great work.
Take care Cindy

I like this poem alot.. the flow was great.. the only rhyming problem i encountered was that regain and again dont rhyme.. (well the way i say it it doesnt) but besides that i think it a was great poem.. its strong because you are not being cliche and going on and on about how sad you are.. you simply tell it how it is.. your were hurt but you will move on.. a positive attitude which is hard to come across.. this was a very enjoyable read :D and thanks for the comment on my poem

The rhymes were not forced and the flow was great the emtions were strong and clear. perfectly done, a postive attitude was a definate plus, this was diffrent, and diffrent is good. 5/5

It was good for the most part.. There were a few things I would change but that's my opinion. The flow was good and there was only 1 ryhming error. I give it a four..
Tyanna

OMG so sad to know that u hav lost ur love. But as you reason out its worth losing, u must b rite...

This was a good poem, most of it was good I enjoyed the way you explained it I liked the form, and the message was good. The only thing I thought could use abit more work was the ending it seemed to just drop off and there was no real closing to it just a thought Plot121

That was a great poem.
It had a wonderful flow,
emotions were shown clearly,
and I loved it!

5/5

Great job!

Great one.wonderful words to describe when you lost your love.5*

The title captures you then the poem is fantastic! its flow was amazing! you used powerful words!

Even though it was sad =[[ ..
It was a rele Great Poem!!
NiCE Job =]]

I loved this one, totally true, totally raw and edgy. Beautiful flow and well thought out stanzas.
Keep it up,
Take care Greta
xo

This is a wonderfull poem with some lovely wording the repetition at the beginging and end really created a lot of effect.

Aww this is sad.... it really is..it touched my heart...your emotions were well expressed throughout the entire write.and i had no problem reading this because the flow was perfect.

another job well done.5/5 once again.

It's rly nice. you did a great job:] *5/5

I can relate to this poem a lot
and i really think your writing is beautiful, keep up the amazing work. 5/5

I loved your poem. Nicely penned! Simple rhyme scheme, the visual image was exceptional, and the grammar was correct. Plus, the point you were trying to express was noticable. Very good job! 5/5

Good poem.
The flow naturally and your emotions well expressed.
Liked reading this piece.
Take care