Ohhh this was so sad...yet so beautifully written.
The pain and emotion scream through the words in this, really tugging at the reader's heart.
Imagery was beautifully done, it created very vivid pictures for me.
You did a wonderful job with this, and good luck for the contest.

Sad, yet beautiful. the imgery used was vivid, and realistic. The emtion was dripping from every well chosen word. this spoke to my soul, in only a way true beauty could. Excellent write hon. 5/5

Sry it took so long to comment but i love this, its really good and i know plenty of people that can relate to this 5/5!