Very insightful poem. Fashion, a topic not usually seen in poems and this was interesting. I must say this topic sucked me since it was so extraordinary. Your definitely worked wonders with a topic untouched.

"So maybe our self esteem would improve;
Maybe our body image was no longer an issue.
If only, Fashion decided to commit suicide."

In this stanza I feel that "was no longer an issue" should be "will not be an issue" just my personal thought for in the rest of the poem your referring to the future. 5/5

"So maybe our self esteem would improve;
Maybe our body image will no longer be an issue.
If only, Fashion decided to commit suicide."

When you think about fashion, its one word, yet it has such an impact on our lives, our pockets, our appearances and our self esteem. Its a dream to imagine a day where fashion will not phase us anymore. A dream. Great poem!

Take Care.

No more what's in and what's not, = No more "What's In" and "What's Not"

ok; if you cannot = ok if you cannot (emit the semicolon)

cloths= clothes(?)

Fashion... will = emit the ellipsis (fashion will)

debate;
Will not be an issue =
debate
will not be an issue

Bombarded; with images = emit the semicolon

will no longer= would no longer (the tense in this line must match with the tense in the above line)

Interesting poem... kinda a rhyming free verse poem. I enjoyed it, and it seemed a little but like you were trying too hard to take something that was cliche and tried to make it unique, which was successful but I think you may have tried a little too hard.

However, the positive aspects were your vocabulary, which was very well trained throughout, and also your rhyme-words, which were not overused or cliche in themselves.

Very well done.

5/5
~Stephen White

Ahhh. so true. i am a size 0 but i dont have any eating disorders or anything. i just stay like this im tired of seeing models 5"9 as thin as me. its disgusting.