Love it, you did a great job! really enjoyed reading it, look forward to reading more of your work 5/5

Great poem.
Very emotional.
Flow was good like your word choice.
Liked the 3th and last stanza the most.
Loved reading it.
Take care

The last stanza hit me HARD. I have to wipe my eyes so many times. You know you have talent and that youve got what it takes when ppl are affect physically by your words. Please don't stop writing. I love reading your poems. 5/5