Comments : Truth

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Ahh ... I love poems that hold different meanings, and this one does it perfectly! In fact I can take it 3 ways, but here's two:

    Ignorance can be bliss ... yet ...

    "I don't want to see
    I don't want to hear
    I don't want to feel"

    But you do!

    Nice job. Keep posting!

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That's different than what I expected. Such an interesting piece. I like how it goes 'I can't' but 'I have' which makes it cool. Flow was off every now and then but the idea stood out. Not much to suggest other than watch for flow probs but great idea.
    ~Faith-less