I really liked this poem! really well written
The door creeks ever time someone passes by,
if they would just ask I can tell them why

thats my fav. stanza keep up the good work. p.s. i'd LOVE it if u'd check my poems out and commented/rated them! thanks alot!!

Well written and I liked your feelings for the picture. Great piece.

Very touching,, loving ur work
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Very cute poem. i love the imagery. That is what I look for in poem, is how well the imagery is set.. and of course grammar. (I am a grammar freak when it comes to "other" peoples writing. lol ) In one sentece you put "to" when it should be "too". watch words like that. 5/5

I really liked this poem. I think it was very well written. The imagery was good, and that helps make a poem great.

5/5.

Nice- I liked the greif and the confusion, just the little confusion of new age technology to some one from long ago.
and I liked the way the mood changed from begining to end

What a sweet poem! You write it down in such a way I can almost see it.
Great job!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid