Comments : Blow me away

  • 16 years ago

    by Darlena

    I'M SORRY. BUT i DiD N0T LiKE THiS P0EM.
    THERE'S N0THiNG SPECiAL AB0UT iT AT ALL.
    iT DiDN`T REALLY FL0W && DiDN`T MADE ME WANNA SAY THiS P0EM iS UNiQUE & 0RiGiNAL. U HAVE W0NDEFUL TH0UGHTS, PHRASES, & iDEAS BUT MAYBE U C0ULD PUT THEM T0 BETTER USE.

    STiLL GREAT TH0UGHTS, BUT C0ULD BE AL0T BETTER.

    CAN U P0SSiBLY READ MY P0EMS WHEN U GET THE TiME.
    THANX.

    ---DARLENA

  • 16 years ago

    by Riz

    AWWWWEE!! ^w^ this is soooooo sweeeeet!!! It's so cute!! A simple poem about a boyfriend. 5/5