Comments : Breaking mirror

  • 14 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    OMGOSH i love this poem.. so much!.. the only stanza i dont like is
    "as days become nights
    the feelings spill out
    the breaking mirror
    is now filled with doubt"
    i hate out and doubt rhyming.. for some reason i just think it always sounds bad.. but other than that... great job miss sardonic :]P

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good poem I liked the flow and the message was good. The stanza was nice, good job keep up the good work. Plot121

  • 14 years ago

    by tyanna

    The 5th stanza messed up the flow a bit but the rest of the poem was great. The wording and everything was very well done. 5/5
    Tyanna

  • 14 years ago

    by Allison

    Wow...this was a really good poem. Keep up the good work! ^.^

    Alyson

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think the poem is absolutely perfect because when a mirror breaks you'll never get the same image out of it you once did. Just like if a family is torn apart your lives will never again be the same. amazing job and great imagery and flow once again 5/5 Keep writting

  • 14 years ago

    by Debbie

    Perhaps an unfortunate event occured which wrought a family crisis. Being delicate and fragile, a family was broken by deceit, empty promises, and suspicions and so-ons. They tried to mend/fix each 'broken glass piece' in vain, unable to discern that the one which was broken drastically is their family itself.

    I absolutely adore this piece. It certainly tugged my heart for it struck a tiny chord with me. Overall it was well-presented. Good job. ~Debbie

  • 14 years ago

    by Viola

    Again incredible poem! wow you're talented. keep it up! =]

  • 14 years ago

    by claire

    This is a great poem - the imagery and descriptions were amazing! I think the metaphor could work for several things, but it definitely works for a breaking/broken family. This is definitely a 5/5!