Comments : Breath [ZaniLa Rhyme]

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Damn girl! Talk about talent..I truely adored this peice..the last stanza actually made my heart skip a beat! Well done hun. Keep it up. Xx Chrissie

  • 16 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Lol...im gonna have to go read it again, I dozed off with like 2 stanzas left....

    Dont worry it wasnt your poem...i went to bed at 1 and got up at 5 this morning...so...thats why =D