Comments : Life In Eternal Freeze.

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    WOW!
    I really love this one.Its so romantic but not at the same time.And it has a really great message.
    Anyway great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 beautifully written. your imagry is amazing and i love your use of words. such few words, such great meaning. excellent job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice. I think u love the nature v much. Do u know what? Yes nature is the best teacher. Wonderful poem 5/5. N at the end u brought the strong point dat is natures beauty cannot b fully shown just with a camera! tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Darlena

    GREAT J0B.
    i L0VED THiS P0EM.
    S0 MUCH MEANiNG BEHiND iT. && GREAT W0RD USE.
    KEEP UP THE G0OD W0RK.

    FEEL FREE T0 CUM & CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS WHENEVER U GET THE CHANCE. THANX. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    What do you mean, exactly,
    By kissed by a clear sky
    ??
    caress the open blue we all know.
    Do you mean
    Caress [[in]] the open blue, we all know...?
    Actually...
    If it was a beautiful portrait,
    Not only could you tell that there was a breeze
    But you could also tell what the trees were feeling and thinking.
    Lol.
    You're right, though.
    A camera could capture beauty and feelnings.
    But
    It cannot capture life itself.
    I don't know.
    There were at lot of things that
    Contradicts with my philosophy.
    So I guess it's going to be a 4/5.
    Sorry :]

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow. this flows and paints such a vivid picture in my mind. and it makes me smile,
    your wording was good, 5/5
    your friend
    gabriella,
    aka.
    estrella-onna
    lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryce

    Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem, i like to write short poems because it gets the read thinking, and the title has no use to the poem, its just a George Orwell book that has a lot of meaning... i have other poems you should check out.

    I really like this poem you wrote, it feels colorful, for some reason, well keep in touch.
    -Bryce

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Imagery was vivid and clear, the emtion was powerful, the flow was great and the word choice was excellent. A job weell done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was ok but i didn't really like it, it had so much meaning but you cannot capture life, the title did not suit the poem, and i just don't know, 4/5 sorry

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Why is the rating low this is really good
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful....I absolutely love this piece...the imagery you portrayed here created beautiful vivid pictures in my mind, and the flow is flawless throughout the piece.
    Simply beautiful work.