Comments : Dont need a hand

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    So stop pretending you
    understand!!for god sake i don't
    need a hand!cause I'm stronger
    than what you'll ever know!
    even if sometimes it doesn't show!

    wow. I could really relate to this poem. The problem is people pretend to understand, but in the end both of us know that they no matter what they just dont understand. Great poem, emotion was strong throughout.

    Take Care :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    awesome poem, I love the rhyming and the flow is great, I enjoyed reading it, and you're right some people think they understand when they don't. 5/5
    kisses stephanie