Comments : River of life

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    WOW...AWESOME...i shouldnt be telling you that..

    but

    its really really good..makes me think >.<

    i loved it 5/5 :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Tracy
    What a wonderful poem. It is really beautiful and heartfelt.

    Really can't answer that and I know it's true
    but when I go, you know I'll leave loving you.

    These lines brought on the tears.
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Again this was perfect. The flow was like water, the word choice amazing, and the emtion powerful, it brought tears to my eyes. Another brillant write Tracy. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Johnathan

    Hi
    I like this poem, it reads easily and has a true sense of feeling!