Very well done Cindy! You did this style in an awesome way!! Love, Debbie

Very well done Cindy! You did this style in an awesome way!! Love, Debbie

Seems like what I'm going through right now. Right when my world seems to be great and getting better, someone or something always tears me back down to square one.

You did great at this style cindy, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!

Am i the only simple poet left on the site?? i guess so.. :o)

This is such a beauty and this pattern seems to be a tough one though you made it so simple in the end.

Great write my friend

all the best and take care

"Can't see me"
Those last two lines paint such a picture of lonliness for me..
Excellent job on this format Cindy! You've done everyone at RTVW proud =)
5/5
*Gem*

You are very talented indeed, i'm learning alot from you with every poem i read, i love your poetry, its really amzing, deep and emotional, great work cindy, i shall be back for more hehe. xox sam

Outstanding effort, you have carried the form very well with this composition and your careful yet excellent choice of words.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Looks too hard to write as a poetry format
But i know you can do even the hardest ones great
The wording was so powerful
Keep it up,
Laura

Nice write cindy. hope you feel better. best wishes ben thompson

The structure is really beautiful and the poem flows really well. Your style is awwwwwwsssommmeee dear. Great 5/5

Great job this was an awesome poem, I really liked it very short but to the point and wording was great , very good job Cindy ~5/5~ your friend Tracy

Yeh. it was very well written good work take care

Brilliantly clever write, Cindy. I always admire people who are so adept at form poetry - from what I've tried, I find it very difficult!
All the very best
Ben