Debbie
Your poems are always so moving. They touch the soul so deeply. I really love this piece.

A poet's tortured mind breaks
Loose paper soul's delight
Thin lines embracing heartache
As minutes splay the night

This stanza is really great. Imagery is excellent.
Love Cindy

OH!! structure is wonderful.....
Content wonderful.......
Moves me like no other........
Speaks to me in volumes...........
Touches my soul completely..........

The poems o.k. too.
10.... but I'm biased..........

Excellent poem, very written and great piece if I must say so myself ,keep up the good work enjoyed reading your poems,~~~5/5 your friend Tracy

A little harder to read because it doesn't have many filler words (which may be the contest you did it for) but it was incredibly good with imagery and the such.
Charisma*

Amazing poem, fantastic imagery here. really caught my eye, made me think.
well done :D

Very beautifully worded. Though the lines are short its having great meanings in it and are clearly expressed. I enjoyed all the lines in this piece.

With love
Fsams

This was wonderful.it was so sad and emotional.

A poet's tortured mind breaks
Loose paper soul's delight
Thin lines embracing heartache
As minutes splay the night

this was great.
best wishes
and take care