I really liked this poem, it flowed really well. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Loved the wording 5/5

Very nice...lots of feeling!

Sarah

And she dreamt of a time
When flowers didn't cry
And the birds sang again
And smiles didn't lie
^^I loved this stanza..i dnt knw y...it's got sumthing beautiful in it
The repetition had a great effect on the work
simple yet well chosen words
It's sad yet nice!
Good job on this one
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Sadly its true. i like the detail. the ending had a punch:)

Great poem.
the flow is really REALLY good, and i love how every second stanza begind with "will things get better" then is followed by the little girl thinking saying screaming (ect.) it :)
2 thumbs wayyy up.

Another amazing poem full of emotion.
I especially like the line:
She sat in shadow
While they sat in the sun
and the verse:
And she dreamt of a time
When flowers didn't cry
And the birds sang again
And smiles didn't lie
Keep up the good work :)
Imi xxx

LOVED this poem. It had a great flow and I couldnt allow myself to stop reading it until I was completely finished. Great job. 5/5