Comments : You'll Always Be Fake...</3

  • 16 years ago

    by kaylee

    I love this poem im the exact same way

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wow This was amazing, the word choice again was simple yet powerful, the emtion was strong, and raw, the word choice was brillant, and the flow was grand, again you have done an amazing job, you have alot of talent
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow, loved this poem also, great words, they were simple, but they had great emotion, yeah, I think it's a guy thing, guys are idiots, but we love them anyway, lol, anyway, loved the poem, it was ((amazing))!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    This is a standard love poem. Although, it is good, it is like a main stream love poem: similar emotions; and, similar actions.

    I can link myself with the poem slightly enough to keep intruiged. The ending of the poem I liked the most.

    Keep on writing, and try to be more original.

    ~Richi~

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Cute poem.. a bit cliche but still it has a nice flow and it was an ejoyable read

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    This was really cute.
    I loved the emotion and your flow was beautiful!
    great job!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The ending was just perfect. It was a powerful message, leave those who don't treat you right. Well done *5/5*