Wow i have a poem smilar to this but i'm not going to post it up for a while but i know how it feels to lose the one you love
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You stole my breath with this one. You really know how to show emotions on paper and it amazes me. I hope to read more of your writings, 5/5

Alright I'm telling you right now stop writing such good poetry that pretty much relates to my life. lol jk. It is very good from structure to word usage.

Incredible! What more can I say! 5/5

Omg...thats really good! i love it. its sooo sad. deff 5/5!!!!

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becca